Hello Class!
I hope your week has got off to a magnificent start. Let’s hope that this week will be less tiring that all its predecessors. 😉
Today in class we started talking about Point of View and how writers use it to develop a sense of both an interior world of a character as well as how they are perceived by other characters. On Wednesday, we’ll look at a past paper and discuss its use of point of view and how to tackle a writing task that asks you to develop an alternative point of view yourself.
Point of View often “inhabits” the mind of a character and reports their observations and feelings about what they experience. As a warm up task to this week’s lesson content, I want you to make a list of words that replace “said” and words that replace “saw”. There are quite a few when you get started!
In the comments below, I want you to design a piece of gossip using the words from these lists. DO NOT use “said” or “saw”.
For example:
“Rudo attested that she observed Dani twerking at the CBC Valentine’s Day Dance.”
Or
“Michelle claimed that Jess is also friends with sticks.”
Or
“I witnessed Nobandile eat a piece of pizza she found on the floor.”
Go ahead, gossip.
The old haggard beggar watched the little boy mourn the death of his dog and whispered a silent prayer.
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She quietly sat at the back of the classroom and she did not utter a word.
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Great!
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I eyeballed my mum’s tummy as she announced that I would be a big sister in a few months.
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awesome!
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She uttered words of sorrow that would make hearts break and eyes flood with tears.
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Good! I’ve always liked “uttered”
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After the Incident, declared to me that she was old enough to make her own decisions.
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Good. But, I sense there’s a noun missing.
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As she viewed the last episode of the series, she expressed her feelings by crying.
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interesting! Can you think of any fun ways to say “crying”? Like “Howling”?
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I realised that i was wrong when she cried at the fact that i hurt her feelings
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Good!
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